Author: Diego Huertas

From the 1920s until the 1980s, a very specific approach to evaluating, appreciating, and interpreting poetry dominated high school and university literature classes. That approach, called “New Criticism,” focused on the “formal” elements of a poem that made it a self-contained art form, like rhyme, meter, metaphor, alliteration, assonance, irony, and symmetry.

t attempted to be objective and scientific but could all too often come off as stuffy, emotionally barren, and profoundly exclusionary. Interestingly, about the time The Sugar Hill Gang busted out with “Rapper’s Delight” in the early 80s, New Criticism started going the way of the 8-Track. The super sleek CDs of post structuralism, postmodernism, and multiculturalism made poetry sound much clearer and much more human.

Which is why it is so interesting that Bradley adopts the tool-kit and terminology of New Criticism to argue that rap lyrics are poetry. One of the criticisms of the book is that Bradley ignores the violence and sexist content of rap and focuses solely on technique–the very strategy that so many writers and scholars of color fought against.

It is, fun, however, to see Biggie lyrics dissected in the same space and in the same way as Robert Frost poems. One wonders what Frost would have thought of Too Short’s “Don’t Fight the Feeling” as poetry. For better or worse, Bradley doesn’t go there; rather, he highlights KRS-One’s onomotopoeias: “Woop! Woop!”

Personification: the attribution characteristics to something

Personification e.g

The pipe swatted him

The pipe tolded him

The pipe crumpled the man’s ribs

Cat/hat Monosyllabic rhyme : a rhyme with just one syllable

My cat/ hit-hat Disyllabic rhyme : a rhyme with two syllables

Bit my cat/hit the hit-hat Multisyllabic rhyme : a rhyme with multiple ( more than two) syllables

2… 14
3.. 14
4…. 11
5…. 10
6…. 12
7…..

How does Eminem use syllables in Lose Yourself to describe his character feelings?

The 9th line shows us that when he was on the stage in ran away because he was completely lost or he forgotten the lines

Those last days. No way of wrapping it pretty or pretending otherwise: Rafa was dying…
He was on his dusty chair looking at himself at the fracture mirror. He didn’t wanted to speak
to anyone so my madre had to guess what food he wanted.
she left it on the right side of the table and when madre came back the plate was on the right side of the table on the same spot with food that left with it.

Rafa’s room looked like if it was abandoned everything was dark, shoes, clothes, medicine
and his red brownish hair on the cold floor. Rafa used to be moreno but when he got sick
his skin turned to blanquito real quick.

Since that happend Madre started to go to church and she got her own
prayer grupo so they could come to our house and pray for my brother.
On the other hand, I was the one who were the most worried.
When my gente started to talk about my brother I used to say
“No hables tanto sapo, that mouth will get you into trouble”.

Laura was the one who gave me the yerba, but on the other hand
she was the one who supported me at all times when I was trying
to forget that my hermano was sick.

She was the one who gave me money so I could go to the hospital and buy Rafa’s medicine and help madre with the rent.
Where did Laura get the money?
Easy,
She seald all the yerba that she had so she could give it to me

When I got back home, I felt that that somethin wasn’t right, that something faltaba en mi vida.
I walked up the corridor that had dust on it.

Then i looked at my brother’s room and it had a letter on his bed so despacito I went to get and it said :

Bebe, I’m with your brother in the hospital, lo estan operando, I will call you later, and remember si no me arreglas la casa cuando llegue te dare tu chancletso. Besos
Madre

Aftee 3 hours she came back home, but the strange thing was that she wasn’t with Rafa. I saw her crying but I predented that I didn’t see her.

Madre’s face looked likr she was in melancholia, her atmosphere was worse than when dad left her and went with the costa riqueña girl. She was destrozada,
She looked like a skeleton.
She didn’t ate anything, there were no feelings anymore and her body looked like she didn’t have a soul anymore.

Well, I’m guessing that this had to happend. Pensaba que mi hermano was going to be with me para siempre but el destino cambio, at least he left me with memories when we were little. Thanks Rafa…
Thanks por aguantarme todos estos años, gracias por enseñarme how to talk with girls and that shit. Thanks for be there when no one else was and thanks for being my brother.
Well I think que estaras mas feliz in heaven than you were in here. But the one thing that I know is that siempre me estaras viendo desde arriba..

Duncan: What bloody man is that? He can report, as seemeth by his plight, of the revolt The newest state.

Malcolm: This is the sergeant
Who is a good and brave soldier who can rescue from capture. Hail, brave friend. Say to the king the knowledge of the broil As thou didst leave it.

Captain: Doubtful it stood
As two spent swimmers that do cling together and choke their art. The merciles McDonald-
Worthy to be a rebel, for to that
The multiplying Villaines of nature
Do swarm upon him-from the Western Isles of lightly armed soldiers who often used a sword or bow and heavely armed soldiers often carrying a heavy battle axe are supplied. And fickle luck on his damnèd quarrel similing,
Showed like a rebel’s whore. But all’s too weak,
For brave Macbeth- well he deserves that name-
Disdaining fortune, with his brandished steel,
Which smoked with bloody execution,
Like bravery’s favourite minion sliced his way till he faced the slave,
Which ne’re shook hands, nor bade farewell to him,
Till ripped him open

This is so scary , everyone is so fighting for their life.
I feel like my whole body freezed but I felt that my heart was on fire telling me don’t be afraid you need to fight dor your men. Then I dont know what happend that my body

Monday

It was a very windy and dark day. “When shall we three meet again in thunder, lightning, or in rain” Suggested Xela the witch.

Then her friend Hanna replied ” When the hurlyburly’s done,  When the battle’s lost and won”

“That will be  ere the set of the sun” replied Stela the third witch

Then quicky Xela replies ” where the place? ”

Then hanna replies ” Upon health”

Then the call just went off they thought that McBeath was behind all this so the started to do some  potions to know who was behind alll this but it dident have answer

Tuesday:

“There to meet Mcbeth.” Said Hanna in a delicate voice

Basically First you need to follow the next steps that am going to write

1. Create tension and persuave the reader 

2. descriptive language and figurativr language 

3. Similies, metaphors, complex sentences and compound sentences

There i was, just sitting there, Minding my own business. These two people with agent skins ask to come with me. I sprinted away but they were faster. They knocked me out. I woke up soon after in a truck!. I was in the trunk fora bout two hours before they stopped. Then this green smoke stuff came out of the top of the thrunk. Then i thought. ‘’do they do this often’’ but the green smoke put me out. I woke up. I glanced around, wondering where I was. I attempted to stretch my arms, but hit the sides of a glass wall. As my vision focused from slightly blurry to clear, I looked around me. I was in a glass box, which appeared to be floating in the air. I kneeled and looked down, observing what was below. A tiny island came into focus.
The island had a small pond, with which was a clear glassy blue. Tropical fish swam in the shallow indention. A blossom tree hung over the pond, and pink petals floated into the water. As I stood up, I noticed two people in similar glass cages on either side of me. I couldn’t exactly tell details of these people, but they looked like they were male. I saw other people farther away, completing the circle of islands. In the center, there was a large island that I could not see the entirety of. From what I could see, there were buildings shrouded in mist. Probably inlaid with traps and other sorts of dangers.

Suddenly, a booming voice echoed all around me. I tried to identify the source, but it seemed to be coming from everywhere. That voice echoed throughout the islands, swerving past trees and buildings. It penetrated the glass cage, informing me that there was nowhere to hide.
“You will be lowered to your islands in 10 SECONDS” the voice announced. I looked down onto my island, mentally preparing myself for the drop.
“10…
9…
8…
7…
6…
5…”
I prepared myself to fall, imagining my body curving into a dive as it hit the water. Water would definitely slow me down from immediate combat, but it was necessary to survive the fall uninjured.
“4…
3…
2…
1…

Go!