first draft December 4, 2015 / Diego Huertas / 1 Comment I gasp as i sat, breathing heavily from the nightmare I just had. The first thing I noticed is that I was Related
December 6, 2015 at 12:48 pm
A good starting point Diego but we need to write the rest of the story before I can give you meaningful feedback.
Also always remember to use a capital ‘I’ and never the lower case one (‘i’) as you did in the first clause.