Author: Diego Huertas
first draft
I gasp as i sat, breathing heavily from the nightmare I just had. The first thing I noticed is that I was
Homework 18th 2015
hunger games :
1. When her sister Prim is chosen by lottery to become the female contestant for District 12 in the Hunger Games, Katniss takes her place. Her hunting partner Gale promises to care for her family.
2. Peeta, the baker’s son, is selected as the male contestant from District 12.
3. Peeta is in love with Katniss, and he is saddened when she tells him that star-crossed lover idea was for show, however Katniss is confused about her feelings for both Peeta and Gale. This leads into the sequel Catching Fire.
Percy jackson:
1. In Camp Half Blood, during a Capture the Flag game, Percy is attacked by the children of Ares. He heals when he steps into the adjoining river and is revealed as the son of Poseidon when Poseidon’s trident appears above his head.
2. Percy is granted a quest to find Zeus’s master bolt which Chiron believes Hades has stolen.
3. Percy, who has ten days before summer solstice to find the bolt, is given magic shoes by Luke before leaving.
charlie and the chocolate factory:
1. Mr. Willy Wonka, the eccentric owner of the greatest chocolate factory in the world, has decided to open the doors of his factory to five lucky children and their parents.
2. Charlie Bucket, the unsuspecting hero of the book, defies all odds in claiming the fifth and final ticket. A poor but virtuous boy, Charlie lives in a tiny house with his parents, Mr. and Mrs. Bucket, and all four of his grandparents.
3. In the factory, Charlie and Grandpa Joe marvel at the unbelievable sights, sounds, and especially smells of the factory. Whereas they are grateful toward and respectful of Mr. Wonka and his factory, the other four children succumb to their own character flaws.
How does Reeve create an effective character with Shrike?
He has a terrible face, when you looked at his poisonous green eyes, it makes you like, like sorry I cannot say or he will kill me the only way to beat him is reading the book please read it and try to be alive. Shrike was just a speck, his green eyes glowing as he stalked out along the strut to watch them go.
Despite being a killing machine shrike dosen’t like to harm children, because he himself once had children before he became a stalker. He is shown to help children, such as when Hester Shaw was left half dead he adopts her.Another example is when a mayor wants him to kill the children from someone else.
look, this is how I describe him: (expectives)
He is made of metal with cables everywhere, with his poisenous eyes that can make you feel confused , he has a big jacket that covers his animatronic system. On his chest he has a metal heart or kind of well you know what do I mean.
For my opinion I Think that Shrike is a human but someone killed him and took his spirit and put it into a killing machine.
(real book describes)
It was seven feet tall, and beneath its coat shone metal armour. The flesh of its long face was pale, glistening with slug-like film of mucus, and here and there a blue white jag of bone showed through the skin. its mouth was a slot full of metal teeth. its nose and the top of its head were covered by long metal skull-piece with tubes and flexes trailing down like dreadlocks, their ends plugged into ports on its chest. its round glass eyes gave it a startled look, as if it had never got over the horrible suprise of what had happend to it.
It makes me think sometimes that shrike is half human and half machine but at thr same time I feel that some day he will envolve to a human. Creates an image of a threating machine that has been damage.
How does he attack?
Shrike the stalker came foward slowly, shoving aside the empty chairs and tables. Fallen glasses burst under its feet. From the shadows behind an avitor swung at it with a sword, but the blade rebound from its armour.
Shrike is an effective character because reeve creates an effect because he says shrike has two sides than one. Some cases he is scary and no hearted like some kind of monster or a kind of creature. Also he has a sensetive and human side, he showns by saying to hester “you can’t stay here child” this shows the good side of him.
The reader would then think that if you tell the other side of shrike the students or the people will create automatically an image about him in his head. This is demostrated when he says ” She went to shrike and told him she wanted to go after valentine.” Shrike said to Hester ” you must not, you’ll be killed” that shows that he is half human.
And now the big moment came, and going to tell you now the good side of shrike and the bad side of him.
The good side of him is that he dosen’t kill or decapite kids but the bad thing of him that he us a stalker and stalks everyone
Life story
Hi my name is Diego and I was born in 12/01/03. I started to walk when I was 10 months and the first year I learned how to jump. I got 2 older brothers that they are in the air forces, my mum works in a clothing store and my dad works in a restaurant. When I was 4 I learn how to play football
Letter to Mr Dastagir
Dear Mr Dastagir,
Hello my name is Diego and I want to talk to you about the bullying in our school. When I walk down the corridors, or in the playground I always hear pupils been racist towards each other only, because they are from an another country.
Sometimes people don’t think about what they are going to say, so they hurt each other with racist comments.
When people are new to this school,they always get bullied for the following reasons:
1. People always annoy new people by telling them that they are rubbish at everything.
2. Some kids have learned bullying from others, (brothers, sisters or friends).They have seen them getting their way by being angry or pushing other people around. They believe that by putting fear in you, they will have the best shot at everything in school or in your neighbourhood.
Bullying is crime to a certain extent. Once it starts hurting the victim really bad emotionally and physically, it should be considered a crime. It affects everyone, aswell in the victim’s life and no one should have to feel threatened all the time. The teachers that see bullying but don’t do anything about it are the most responsible. They have the authority to stop the bully and punish them. If they witness it they could address the issue to the principal and call the bully’s parents.
The cause of the bullying could be household problems causing them to feel angry all the time or upset so they bully to make themselves feel better. Telling the parents could let them know what their child is up to and they can reach out to the child and help or get them help. Students that are bystanders are responsible. They can go and tell a teacher who yet again has the authority to do something about it. The main thing is if more people stand up the bully will stand down. If the victim tends to be smaller i doubt the words they will call the bully will really affect them. Since the bully started it and forced the victim to try and fight back some way it shouldn’t be the same as bullying their just trying to get the bully to stop, the only way to stop bullying is to stop the bully and stop standing by.
Bullying has become a big abuse,bullying comes in many shapes and forms. Being the last picked for a team, excluded from a party, pushed in the hallway, or teased are just a few examples of bullying. Parents, teachers, and students hear it, see it, but how to intervene and prevent bullying is the big question. What do teachers and parents let slide or put a stop to? When peers see bullying, do they get involved? What if the bully turns their attention onto them as a new victim? Or if they report the incident to an adult, they run the risk of being labeled as a tattle-tail? From an adult’s perspective, how can they punish what they do not see?. However, words hurt most of all. yet a child’s broken spirit can be considerably worse. So it must be stopped.
Bullying has been a growing issue over the years – it is about time to make it stop! The number of kids that are starting to become victims as well as bullies is increasing. Bullying is a major problem that we haven’t been able to stop. Every year more and more people are bullied at school and online, and even at work.In my opinion I think these people are crying out for help.
Thanks for listening
Your sincerely Diego 7W1p
Black smoke poured out of the chimneys of the sadness factories and hung over the city like bad news
key word foreshadowing
Warning given to the reader by the writer an idea that develops later in the story
essay
the mood in chapter 1 is extremely sad. Because the city is describe sad ” the saddest cities, a city so ruinously sad that had forgotten his name. It stood by mournful sea full of glumfish, which were miserable to eat that they made people belch with melancholy even though the skies were blue. Horoun a happy kid lives in the sad city with his parents but one day they got seperated soy the relationship got more worse. But on his new adventure meet new friends but no one imagine that horoun will do that thing that he drunk a the magic water!! And no one knows what will happens next

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